tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2570531746418227277.post7845513109313341906..comments2021-06-14T20:45:40.564-04:00Comments on Miranda Liasson: Help for Writing in the First Person...from Wendy LaCapraMiranda Liassonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02393964846829467698noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2570531746418227277.post-82148797989808172792011-04-03T00:17:46.495-04:002011-04-03T00:17:46.495-04:00Thanks, Wendy. :)Thanks, Wendy. :)Miranda Liassonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02393964846829467698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2570531746418227277.post-43846379097515425132011-04-02T12:02:37.612-04:002011-04-02T12:02:37.612-04:00It's so much easier to read than it is to writ...It's so much easier to read than it is to write! For instance, you pointed out that my movement tags were slowing my pacing in my first chapter. Removing them made the action come alive--Thank you, Thank you. <br /><br />Your input has been so valuable! I think you are brilliant, too.Wendy La Caprahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06603341707068466176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2570531746418227277.post-61252543297375301722011-04-02T12:01:15.377-04:002011-04-02T12:01:15.377-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Wendy La Caprahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06603341707068466176noreply@blogger.com